Narrative Medicine Monday: The Train

I featured one of Dr. Thomas Gibbs’ other essays on my very first Narrative Medicine Monday post in 2016. Today’s piece, found in the excellent flash essay journal Brevity, highlights another experience altogether. Dr. Gibbs is an obstetrician and therefore encounters dramatic medical emergencies that can put two lives at risk simultaneously. This was the case in “The Train,” when Gibbs is paged in the early morning hours about a bleeding pregnant patient who works in his office. Gibbs tells her husband to drive the patient himself to the hospital as he knows the urgency of the situation and that the local EMTs would take longer to get her there. He treats the patient as she arrives and disaster is averted. When he goes to inform the patient’s husband in the waiting room, he finds the husband shaken. In just getting to the hospital, all of them were in danger.

This piece made me think of all the advice we give patients, all the instructions we get from well-meaning physicians. Sometimes this advice has unintended consequences, either because patients misinterpret what was said or the instructions weren’t communicated effectively or because of events entirely out of anyone’s control. When you read the final lines of this essay, what were your first thoughts about the situation?

Writing Prompt: Have you given or gotten advice from a physician that, when followed, caused unforeseen consequences? Consider what happened or imagine what could have happened. As a physician, how did this change your medical practice or, as a patient, your relationship with that physician? Write for 10 minutes.

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Narrative Medicine Monday: Published!


Starting the year off sharing some great news! I recently received in the mail the Fall 2016 Edition of OUHSC’s Blood and Thunder Journal, which includes two of my essays. I’ve had several pieces published in online journals but there is a special kind of excitement that comes from seeing your name in print on a tangible page. I’m humbled that two of my favorite shorts “Expectant” and “Burst” found a home in this narrative medicine collection.

“Expectant” chronicles the very first delivery I witnessed. Obstetrics was a revelation to me as a young medical student, especially never having had children myself. I was in awe of the entire process and this short essay reveals my own insecurities as I was christened into the world of medicine.

“Burst” is about my first continuity delivery in residency training: a pregnancy meant to be followed throughout all nine months to completion. I was a new physician and had much to learn about the unpredictable nature of obstetrics.

One of my writing goals for 2017 is to make significant progress on a book-length collection of narrative medicine essays.  I’m starting the year off taking Creative Nonfiction’s online course “Writing Your Nonfiction Book Proposal”. Finding time to edit and submit my work has been a continual challenge but writing classes provide encouragement and structure to make the time, harness the energy and muster the gumption to keep at it. I’m eager to let go of the draining and perfectionist tendencies of 2016 and write on in 2017. Holding a palpable culmination of my writing efforts is an encouraging way to embark on a new year and I’m grateful.

 

 

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Narrative Medicine Monday: The Grand Hotel Mackinac Island

Welcome to Narrative Medicine Monday. Each Monday I’ll post a narrative medicine piece, a short discussion, a few questions and a related prompt. I hope this will provide a place for thoughtful reflection and discussion about medicine and how narrative medicine can help tell patient and provider stories in a meaningful way.

Thomas Gibbs’ The Grand Hotel Mackinac Island is an intense braided essay by an obstetrician, published in Hippocampus Magazine. From the very beginning, we are thrust into Gibbs’ crisis: his obstetrical patient is hemorrhaging and her life is in danger. He intersperses these events with details about the vacation, long awaited, he was supposed to leave for that same day. Gibbs touches on what it means to be a physician invested in your patients, and the inherent sacrifices therein.

If you are a medical provider, have you ever been in a situation where you felt you just couldn’t leave a patient, even for a significant personal or family event? What are the privileges of being a medical provider? What are the sacrifices?

All of us have had to sacrifice an aspect of our personal life due to our work, be it inside or outside of the home. What have you let go of because of your work?

Writing Prompt: Think about a time your life was disrupted by an unexpected medical diagnosis or outcome, either as a patient or as a medical provider. Write for 10 minutes about this disruption. Did you have to let go of anything to be present?

*A note about prompts: When writing from a prompt, consider a “free write”, where you set a timer and write for the full 10 minutes and don’t edit while you write. There’s always time to return to editing later. Free writing is about getting your story down on paper; you may be surprised what your writing reveals.

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