Poet Rebekah Denison Hewitt is one of Narrative Magazine’s poetry contest winners this year. Her “Karyotype and Other Poems” are a sequence of three poems that reveal different aspects of motherhood, from fetal testing to the fear and risk inherent in parenting.
In “Karyotype,” Hewitt illuminates the process of cell-free DNA extracted from a mother’s blood around ten weeks of gestation, a test that provides genetic information about the fetus. Hewitt’s genetic counselor “begins / to list every disorder / a lab can find in a fetus….” When this relatively new test became available with my third child, despite my medical background, I was still struck, as Hewitt seems, by the wonder of it, these fragments of my baby’s DNA floating through my veins: “The needled blood / from my arm a soup / of genetic code.”
Though Hewitt recalls a high school quiz “matching symptoms to disorder,” there is a turn in her reflection on the soul: “I think souls must exist / in wanted things. Dogs go to heaven, not roaches.”
Hewitt notes there is a calculation to how much information we really want to know: “Just trisomy 21, 18, 13? / Or microdeletions, too? / My blood contains the risk / of something missing—a malformation / of the head—or worse.” Ultimately, though, she brings the question back to the essentials of what makes us human, beyond that of just our strands of DNA: “What makes this body inside me / more than an animal, clawing its way out…”
Writing Prompt: Hewitt writes about what she learned of some genetic disorders in high school and how she recalled this later when she was getting cell-free DNA testing. Think of something you learned in a science class that, many years later, manifested in an unexpected way in your life: genetics, biology, chemistry. Alternatively, think of a time you had a medical test done and the broader issues (what constitutes a “soul?”) that test might’ve brought up for you. Write for 10 minutes.